Can you comment my poem?
admin January 19th, 2012
please what do u think?
its different than my other poems
I dunno if i should post it in my blog with poems :S
ephedrine is my drug
caffeine my medicine
aspirin fight the fire
burning right inside my body
under fat covered bones
ana help me kill the fat
eca & ana my lovers always with me
help me make my dreams come true
i believe in perfection
and I know I can make it
but I need to be strong
and always control
- Diet Pills
- Comments(4)
Do it its a very impresive poem
Is this a poem?
Original and concise !
I like it !!!
I like your poem… though what you are expressing is not too subtle; I think that’s what you were going for, but you shouldn’t feel like you need to be so skinny… that is not perfection. Perfection is difficult (physically), but worth it. It will make you feel better and you will be in control. What you need to do is: eat right everyday and work out often during the week or everyday in order to maintain a healthy and good looking physique =). Please be healthy and take care of yourself!